Tuesday, December 27, 2011


Someday I will see my book on a bookshelf

Someday I will look back on submitting to editors as a learning experience

Someday I will finish my WIP

Someday I will write a decent blog post again

But it's not today

Friday, December 23, 2011

Adendum to the last post...


I have also learned that if a piece of scotch tape (the gift wrap kind) accidentally gets stuck to your lip (don't ask) it WILL pull a chunk of your lip skin with it.

(Get your mind out of the gutter, girls. You know which lips I'm referring to)

Monday, December 12, 2011

A few things I've learned this week...

Fear not, Fan Club! This is not the witty Christmas post I've long been crafting together in my substantially follicled head. This is just a quick blurb by which I will share a few things I have learned in the hopes of sparing you the same painful learning curve I've had to endure. (Tis the season, and all).

#1. If you have a child who likes to bang on keyboards, NEVER, EVER leave your WIP open on your computer. A great love scene with (fill in the blank: Bradley Cooper, Zac Efron, Mark Wahlberg, Matt Lauer, (it could happen)) can quickly turn into a blank screen and a houseful of expletives directed at your child who will in turn repeat them to their teacher.

#2. Write down your Blogger password. On the occasion your computer doesn't "remember" for you--it makes logging in for a blog post a whole lot easier.

#3. Don't get annoyed with the stupidity of Hollywood. Case in point: The novelty license plates they use in movies. Unless you just arrived to this country, you know that license plates (novelty included) are only allotted SEVEN characters. So when you see an awesome movie like THE LINCOLN LAWYER, starring the very delishhhhous Matthew McConaughey, and his license plate reads, NOTGULTY, don't freak out. You'll only drive yourself, and your husband crazy.

And finally,

#4. If your husband says things around the house like, "I gotta see a man about a horse," when referring to a bowel movement, don't be surprised when your nine-year-old daughter suddenly pushes herself away from the dinner table, and announces with the dramatic prowess of an academy award winner, "I'VE GOTTA TAKE A DUMP!" I found that it's a whole lot easier to just laugh, and retell the story on your blog, than to remind her that not only is that gross but she never waited to be excused from the table to go take that dump.

Until next time, my friends...

Sunday, November 27, 2011

BAH, HUMBUG!! Things that drive me NUTS about the Christmas Season

Relax, Frances! Don't get your undies all twisted. I'm not really a Scrooge--but there are a few things that really annoy me about the Christmas season. Rather than fester on them though; which inevitably results in me seeking comfort at the bottom of a beer bottle or a bag of holiday M&Ms, I thought I'd vent my annoyances to all of you. And here they are:


Airing the Christmas classics (i.e., A Charlie Brown Christmas, The Grinch, Frosty) 17 times
before December 2nd. When I was a kid, way back in the 80's, they aired the show once. ONCE! You looked forward to that night for weeks. And if, on the off chance you missed it...well then, you cried, and then got over it.

Giving impersonal gifts. Give me a cinnamon scented votive in a snowman candle holder any day of the week, (I love cinnamon and candles!) but don't expect me to give you something impersonal back. I don't give impersonal gifts--I CANNOT DO IT! If I cannot find something I know you will love--I will buy something I would love. Like a Jake Ryan T-shirt. (I already have one of these--but I don't have a Bradley Cooper one...)
Santa yard decorations intermingled with the Nativity scene. (sigh) Go secular. Go religious. I don't really care--but don't have Santa standing above the baby Jesus' manger--it's just WEIRD!

People that make you WAIT to open a gift until Christmas morning. If we exchange gifts on December 17, knowing we won't see each other on Christmas morning,
please don't tell me to wait until then to open it. The best part of giving a gift is seeing the recipient's expression! (Hopefully the expression will be a happy one--though my husband nearly bought me a steering wheel for a dying Honda Prelude 17 years ago. That would not have been a happy one.) And if you do you forbid me from opening it, trust that the second you pull out of the California Pizza Kitchen parking lot where we've just had our holiday girl's lunch, I will be tearing into that bad boy. My Jeep smells like stale goldfish crackers and dirt. I need a little cinnamon-scented candle action to clear things up.

Those doughy candy cane coo
kies that taste like chalk. You know the ones I'm talking about. The ones your stay-at-home neighbor/mom whips up to make you look like a slacker in front of your children? (Because you opted not to bake--instead purchasing some festively packaged caramel corn from Target). Every year, EVERYBODY in your house forgets that those cookies taste like crap--they just know that you didn't labor over a hot oven for seven hours making them.

Holiday work parties. (sigh) I hate them almost as much as I hate office birthday parties. (Except the year I met Aerosmith in the bar of the hotel where my husband had his party 15 years ago. That's for an entirely different blog post, though). I already sacrifice 40 hours of my life every week for you people--do I really need to give you another four? And on a weekend??!!!

Parking lots. I'm an incredibly impatient person. Please climb in your car, buckle the kids, and get the heck out of the space within 30 seconds, or I will play that game where I imagine how many points I will earn if I can hit you while keeping your Uggs on your feet. (By the way, Uggs and cut-off shorts do not look good.)

Pink Christmas trees. Just...DON'T!

Feel free to share your Christmas grievances below.
Ho, Ho, Ho! (Oh yeah, I don't like hoes parading around on Christmas, either. Take a break, girl. Have some eggnog or somethin')

Friday, November 18, 2011

Interview with (MY) agent, RACHAEL DUGAS

Hip, Hip, HOORAY!
I am so excited for this second installment of the THREE AGENTS WHO CHANGED MY LIFE mini-blog series.

Today it is my pleasure to introduce you to MY amazing agent, Rachael Dugas of Talcott Notch Literary Services. (I do not have a head shot of Rachael, but imagine a dainty brunette with sparkly eyes and a giggle that rivals a Disney princess and you've got her).

For all of you agented readers, you how amazing it feels when someone other than your mother thinks your book is awesome. (Let's face it--your mom is still impressed that you can read an entire book, let alone write one). And for all of you soon-to-be agented folks, hang in there. Every painful rejection becomes a distant memory when you get THE CALL from THE AGENT who loves your book as much as you do. At least that's how it worked for me.

Now, on to the interview...

RR: How long have you been agenting, and what made you decide to pursue it?
RD: I have been an agent for about 5 months now. Publishing seemed like an interesting way to use my English degree and I love the idea of being a part of the process that brings amazing new material to the shelves. I previously held a long editorial internship, which was my first hands-on experience in the industry, and I enjoyed it greatly. When I was presented with this opportunity, I was excited to explore the agent side of the industry. I love having the chance to discover new material and to advocate for authors/manuscripts I really believe in.

RR: What genres do you represent?

RD: Currently, my authors fall under the categories of YA, MG, romance, women's fiction,
and cookbooks. I try to keep an open mind and give any great manuscript a chance, regardless of the genre. However, I will admit that you will probably have a difficult time winning me over with Sci-Fi/Fantasy-this is more due to my relative ignorance than lack of interest.

RR: When does a query have the "wow" factor?

RD: A query that is well-written, clear, and that captures the tone and feel of the story perfectly will always make an impression upon me. Of course, a really phenomenal idea can also generate that "wow" factor regardless.

RR: What should authors avoid in their query letters?

RD: First and foremost, really proofread your query letter before you send it. If you have awkward sentence construction and multiple typos, we will fail to be convinced that you can actually write. Additionally, while politeness will get you far, over-obsequiousness can be a turn-off. Just generally, be specific and describe your story. If something sounds too generic, I'm not likely to request anything more. To give a more specific example of something to avoid, I would highly recommend that you don't write from the perspective of your character. You might think it's creative, but we know the author is writing the query, not the character, and, more often than not, it comes across as odd, not interesting. I find it's especially strange when this sort of letter is written from an animal's perspective-and we've received more than one of those during my tenure here!

RR: Do you see any specific trends in the market right now?
RD: It's hard to say. One thing I can say with relative certainty is that it seems that paranormal is past its prime, especially vampires/werewolves/shifters. I've seen several books about the Amish recently, which surprised me, both in YA and adult fiction, but I'd categorize that as more of a mini-trend. Certainly, in YA, dark is name of the game, both in the fantastic and realistic universes.

RR: What's on your wish list?

RD: I would love a really amazing memoir-that is a genre I really enjoy but do not currently represent. I would also love a really smart, well-written commercial adult fiction novel or a really phenomenal women's fiction that relates to cooking. It's kind of been done, at this point, and I've read a couple that were ok, but if I found one that really blew me away, I'd love to give it a go.

RR: What are you reading right now? (for pleasure)

RD: Reading for pleasure? What's that?
Oh, yes, I remember those days!
I don't really have much time to read "for fun" lately, but, when I do, I tend to return to some of my all-time favorites, like The Bell Jar, Little Women, anything by David Sedaris, food memoirs like Julia Child's My Life in France and anything by Ruth Reichl or Jeffrey Steingarten, A.S. Byatt, John Connolly, etc. I also read a lot of cookbooks. The book that I am dying to get my hands on right now is the finale to Gregory Maguire's "Wicked years", Out of Oz.

RR: What is the typical day like in the life of an agent?
RD: It really varies. Most days, I start by checking my email for correspondences with clients,
agents, and authors I am considering working with. Next, I usually catch up on any partials that are sitting in my inbox. From there, I might do some research for my clients, do some general market research, work on a query letter, or read some of the manuscripts in my ever-increasing queue.

And just for fun, a few of my favorite James Lipton questions:

RR: What is your favorite word?

RD: Catalyst, scintillating, salacious, quintessential, brouhaha

RR: What is your least favorite word?

RD: Moist
(Rookie side note: AGREED! Moist is nearly as bad as "drip")

RR: What sound or noise do you love?

RD: The sound of autumn leaves crunching beneath my feet, especially when I'm out walking my dog and she's crunching them under her little paws too!

RR: What sound or noise do you hate?

RD: Nails on a blackboard or any kind of scraping noise, fire alarms, loud sirens, exploding guns/cannons… anything jarring really.

RR: What profession other than your own would you like to attempt?

RD: Food Network star or Broadway actress

RR: What profession would you not like to do?
RD: Anything with numbers or anything uber dirty or physical. I'm not exactly an outdoorsy sort of girl!

Wow--great interview, Rachael! Thanks for your candid answers and the behind-the-scenes look at life as an agent, though you neglected to mention pacifying neurotic clients in your daily activities. Hee.

Rachael is currently open to submissions. You can find the query guidelines on the agency's website.

*One last thing: Because we are nearing the day of thanks, I'd like to say how incredibly thankful I am to have Rachael in my life. She's patient, helpful, supportive, understanding and vigilant not only in her efforts to get my book on the shelves, but to help me become the best writer I can be. Thank you, Rachael!

Sunday, November 13, 2011

Rest in peace my beloved...

The 4th edition of Rookie's Revlon Ionic Ceramic Pro Stylist was laid to rest on Saturday, November 12, 2011, after its motor began to sputter out mid-blow. Unlike the 4th edition's predecessor, Rookie elected to retire her companion before it became a fire hazard--sending sparks into her mane and, in turn, forcing Rookie to throw the 3rd edition across the room while swearing like a long-haul trucker.

The 4th edition leaves behind a legacy of follicular beauty and ionic shine that can only be compared to Heaven's streets of gold. You have been replaced my beloved, (Same model: $18.99 at Target, plus 5% discount with the Target
red debit card) but you will never be forgotten.

Sunday, October 30, 2011

Interview with agent Nicole Resciniti

I don't really believe in luck, nor do I hold much stock in coincidences. I'm one of those old school, faithful types who believes everything happens for a reason. This includes the divine placement of people I've met--more specifically the people I've met on my journey to becoming a writer.

From a herd of the most creative, talented writers on the blogosphere, to other hopeful authors looking to connect, to a best friend who gets me like no one else can (and loves me anyway), I've been showered with encouragement, support and love from folks who two years ago didn't exist to me.

But the blessings don't end there. Along this awesome (read: frustrating/exhausting/exhilarating) road, I've also come to know three amazing and generous ladies who have truly changed my life as a writer. And get this...THEY'RE ALL AGENTS!! (Crazy, right?! They're NOT the dream-crushing trolls we thought they were.)

Today I'd like to introduce you to the first of these amazing women. Please welcome to the Rookie Riter stage, the stupendous Nicole Resciniti of the Seymour Agency. *applause, applause, applause* Settle down everyone, as we jump in with the questions:

How long have you been agenting, and what made you decide to pursue it?

NR: I began officially acquiring clients about nine months ago, after receiving my accreditation from AAR.
Mary Sue Seymour offered me the opportunity and after studying her techniques, I thought this was a career I could excel at. I fell in love with this side of the publishing business because it is forever changing and it allows me the flexibility to read and champion an assortment of projects.

RR: What genres do you represent?

NR: Everything with the exception of erotica and poetry. We’re really selective about nonfiction—authors need to have a strong platform. I’m particularly interested in romance and sci-fi/fantasy/UF.

RR: When does a query have the “wow” factor?

NR: Let’s face it, queries are brutal. Take a 100k word book and summarize all its greatness and grandeur in a one-page letter? Plus convey how you, the author, are equally amazing?

The “wow” factor for me comes when the query resembles a book blurb—of a book I’d want to buy.

RR: What should authors avoid in their query letters

NR: Queries are tough, but by adhering to some simple guidelines, any author can entice an author/agent.

Keep it short. Include the vital information: genre, word count, logline/hook, and a concise summary (the kind you’d find on the back cover of a published novel).

There are a few things I would advise an author to “leave out” of their query. Any variations of the following are probably ill-advised:

--“I spent ___ years writing this book.” You’re trying to convey your passion and dedication to this project by disclosing the numerous years you’ve toiled over your novel, but an agent/editor takes away something entirely different, namely, “this person may not be a ‘career’ author.” Many editors will offer for more than one book, and agents want to know their authors can deliver.

--“This is my first book.” When an author writes this in a query, it may suggest that this isn’t their strongest work. Yes, some authors sit down and write bestselling work straight out of the gate, but most authors do not. Most toil and labor and have one (or several) “practice” novels stashed away in a drawer or on a hard drive somewhere, because these beginner books were the projects they learned on. Writing is a craft that develops and improves with time.

--“My mother/spouse/sibling/BFF read this and loves it.” Well, of course they do. That’s what friends and family are for. Editors and readers are much harsher critics. On the flip side, listing your affiliations with writer’s groups, previous publications, and/or contest awards will tell an editor/agent that you’ve done your homework.

--“I’m the next ________(insert NYT Bestseller’s name).” If you really feel it imperative to make this kind of statement then ‘in the vein of’ or ‘fans of’ a certain bestselling author may be a safer way to convey the same idea. Comparisons can help, but it’s usually better to be yourself, to find your own voice and style.

-- No white space. If you’ve filled virtually every line on the page, chances are you’ve said too much. Keep the exposition tight.

RR: Do you see any specific trends in the market right now? (Read: Is paranormal still the cat’s pajamas?)

NR: Dark paranormals still sell, and the darker, the better. By the time most trends are identified they’ve usually passed. I don’t worry about trends for a few reasons. First, writing is cyclical. Something that was once popular may be not be in high demand, but the market will eventually swing back to it. Another reason is because it all boils down to the writing. If the book is spectacular enough, it won’t matter.

RR: What’s on your wish list?

NR: Ooh, my tastes vary, but I can never resist a good romance. Or a thoughtful mystery. I’d really like to find more sci-fi/fantasy. Crossover YA is always high on my wish list.

It all comes down to voice—your voice, Bethany, is spectacular by the way. *blushed when I read this* Regardless of the genre, if the voice is very strong and distinct, I will seek to work with that author.

RR: What are you reading right now? (for pleasure)

NR: Janet Evanovitch’s latest Stephanie Plum novel, Explosive Eighteen.

RR: What is the typical day like in the life of an agent?

NR: Check email (usually from phone before I even get out of bed). Reply to emails, read queries. Client manuscripts/edits/marketing/contracts take up the majority of the day. I may work with a client on a manuscript several times before it’s ready for submission. Editing is a big part of the job.

I correspond with editors to follow-up on submissions and to pitch new projects. I browse PM to see what’s selling and who’s buying. I do lunches or drinks (yum) whenever possible to pitch a client’s work face-to-face. I LOVE the projects I represent, and it’s really important to convey that enthusiasm to an editor. The remainder of my day is spent reading requested partials and complete manuscripts.

And just for fun, a few of my favorite James Lipton questions:

RR: What is your favorite word?

NR: Audacity. (Do I want to see it used in books I read? No, not necessarily. But I DO like bold writers.) *Commentary from the host: I squeed out loud when I read this. Audacity is also my favorite word*

RR: What is your least favorite word?

NR: Looked. (It’s the most common repeat word I come across in the manuscripts I read. Instead of “looking” at something, SHOW what is seen.)

RR: What sound or noise do you love?

NR: Cicadas. Hands-down. It is the sound of summer.

RR: What sound or noise do you hate?

NR: My alarm clock. It’s evil. I wake-up before the alarm just to avoid the blaring beeps.

RR: What profession other than your own would you like to attempt? Dive instructor. I love scuba.

Wow!! If this interview doesn't earn me an Emmy...

Thank you, Nicole, for your thoughtful and helpful answers. I'm sure your inbox will be overflowing now. Sorry...

Nicole is currently accepting queries and can be reached via the guidelines posted on the agency's website.

(Any of you interested in the specifics of why I love this gal so much--feel free to email me and I'll share. I won't embarrass her publicly with all my praise.)

Please visit again, as I'll be posting interviews with my other "life-changing" agents in the near future.